To make the plot of our film different, we decided to experiment with Todorov’s narrative theory; how films start in equilibrium before a disruption occurs. Our sequence goes against this; a man has been killed and Dawn is trying to deal with the corpse.
However, the difference between our film and others is that most thrillers (especially horror and action) begin with somebody (usually female) being killed, such as in the film Scream (1996, Craven)
Additionally, because we wanted our audience to know that it was a thriller, we had to include some genre conventions but to keep our film experimental; we deliberately subverted some of them as well:
- Conventions we followed - disturbing music, somebody has been killed and the killer doesn't want to get caught.
- Conventions we subverted - set at daytime, the killer is female and the killer is not alone
- Both characters are introduced, Dawn the protagonist and the dead body she has to deal with.
- From the shots of the curtain, it shows the reader that the sequence is set at dawn (which we further anchored with our film’s title.)
- Our sequence has titles; each of us has a title for a role we helped out with. Tom Rivlin is the name of my friend who was our test actor on the second shoot.
- Our soundtrack suits the content of the film, it is slow and calm but is unsettling in the context of our film about a dead body.